Lucy

A Chimpanzee Speaks to God

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I feel my fur itching inside.
I was just thinking about this type of thing yesterday. On cuteoverload there was a video of an elephant painting a portrait of itself. With paintbrush in trunk, painted his portrait holding a flower in his trunk, free and happy. It made me a little sad.
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wow this was very clever
So many stories within that story !!
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Oh, how I like this, very good, it's so well thought out, and well written. Excellent!!!

Have a good night Lucy :)

Animals are smarter than we give them credit for being. Elephants are supposedly quite bright. Our definitions of animal intelligence unfortunately revolve around obedience and the performance of tricks. Maybe the most intelligent animals just refuse us?

Sounds sad Lavender. Something sad about those wrinkled large lumbering beasts, who bury their dead witht their trunks. Hey you are getting another poem out of me.

Lucy, who thanks Lydia, her muse

Thanks SweetMisery!!! I am feeling good about "clever."

Lucy

true. Dr. Leaky' Lucy is coming to Seattle, a great, possilbly furred mother. It will be neat to stare upon her remnants. Close to religion for me!

Lucy

Thanks Tammie. Being raised Catholic, I struggled with what I knew of evolution as a child. I think the assumption was that because we were part animal, we were less divine. I think animals are divine. We don't see them killing each other in large wars. I love animals greatly.

Lucy

Haha! I love being an accidental muse! :-)
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I really like the third stanza Lucy ("Yet we worry over impending alterations in our fabric, forms we now inhabit"), but the whole thing fits together quite well. This one's ready for publication!
I see, I can understand that. Animals are wonderful, and you're right, they don't senselessly go to war and kill , or kill in genocides.

Have a great day Lucy :)

thanks Renee. I was thinking of trying for Sub Terrain's religion theme issue.

Lucy

amazing... and yet this is really happening... this could change the world and open a few eyes at least...

candy

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