Lucy

A Heaven for Marion

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"tomatoes and shellfish

from a magical hedge"

I don't know if it's visuals or syllables, but the words - so different - work. Like when Somerset Maugham named his story, "Moon and Sixpence" - one kept thinking of the vision long after the story was finished.

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SO good!
Such a lovely tribute....such a lovely world that would be....

I got the idea from a friend of mine. I thought about what would make my mother happy in heaven.

Lucy

thanks Aubrey. I liked that line too. I wrote "bush" first, then thought "hedge" sounded better. Words are meanings, but they are also sounds. I like neologisms for that purpose at times.

Lucy

thanks Lavender.

Lucy

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Lovely. So gentle, so loving. Thank you.

thanks Margy.

Lucy

its quite beautiful!

candy

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