Lucy

Aphrodite in Spangles

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I cannot believe no one has, of yet, commented on this Lucy!

A magical deeply personal work that I find intriguing.

I love the first stanza

but wish you had not repeated the "spangles' in stanza 6.


"as tender as a veined crocus

for our terrible animosity"

Magical!

Only a woman could have written this I suspect

but its gritty and true.

Well done

eric

[this is good]
Thanks Eric. It is my love poem to my husband. We've been married for eleven years. In every long marriage, there is old animosity and old love. This was a departure from my usual style. This came out of a workshop I had with my favorite poet-teacher Judith Roche. She liked it, but it felt kind of like a suit I'd never worn before.

Grins lucy

eleven years is a long time in these crazy days. Never forget

you have to keep working at it every day.

Trying on new artistic clothes keeps you bold and fearless.

e

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